Mark Weiss

 

Full Wheelbarrow


A Dream and a Story

1
In my dream I was wheeling a red                                               
wheelbarrow. There were chickens
everywhere, white
as stars. Strangely, they were silent
and soft
and pleasant to look upon.

2
The hen must be white
to cleanse properly. And it was,
a gentle creature, surprised at its fate
and questioning
in the language of chickens.
After he had removed whatever curse
from us Armando
slit its neck and fed the blood
to the goddess.

3
When my shoulder mends
I will go to the farm
where they raise chickens in a long
warehouse and fill a wheelbarrow
with their droppings
for my garden.
And think of the bird dead
for whatever ailed me
in far-off Cuba.


Variations

1
Two barrows had I, red
and green. The chickens roosted
in the red, so I bought
the other. And they roosted there
as well. Now my yard is filled
with barrows.
Under each
white hen
a clutch of eggs,
some white
some brown.

2
To a chicken a wheelbarrow
must be like the back seat
of my father's chevy.
Add straw, and
what a ride!

3
Hey Flossie! See
what the chickens
are doing!


Homage à Williams

First Version

Someone has painted the wheelbarrow
with raspberry jam. The chickens
have discovered the seeds,
and peck furiously, a frantic din
not unlike music. Not good
for bird or barrow–the first
blunted, the second
dented. And the hens
flecked with red,
part preserve,
part blood. They were white
they were white
but now are sullied.
No eggs tomorrow.

Perhaps it was god who did the painting.
Now there will be death
and insects
and a world of changes.
Who would have thought
so much
could depend upon
a red wheelbarrow?


Second Version

So much depends
upon

a red wheel
barrow

glazed with rain
water

surrounded
by professors

beside the white
chickens



Theories

1
Sometimes rural kids would have wheelbarrow races, with one kid in the passenger seat and another pushing. Almost as much fun as falling down and hurting yourself. Winslow Homer did a painting of one such. So maybe the poem is from the point of view of a contestant or the corporate sponsor of an impending race.

Or maybe it's a Mormon contemplating pushing one to Utah with all his worldly goods c. 1848.

Or maybe there's a hidden reference to the neolithic tombs that punctuate the British landscape--barrows--but here on wheels, the message a hymn to American progress, and that aint chickens!

Or maybe the red refers to the putative color of the indigenous population surrounded by cowardly white folks who make walking barefoot a messy business.

Come to think of it, farm boys and chickens. Is that "pastoral?"

I have a spade in the garden. What must the neighbors think?

2
Or again, those chicken droppings would be great for the flowers, and the wheelbarrow the means of transport. Bill and Flossie loved flowers--they looked so cheerful against the sooty sky. So maybe it's a red wheelbarrow and those chickens are chickens.

There was a gaiety to those shiny red things.




 


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